creative project, animatic draft 1

Here is my first animatic draft based on a 30s sound piece I created from a class exercise. In advanced animation research class, we were asked to go for a walk around the school and jot down notes to describe the scenes we would like to choose. Later, we exchanged the notes in class. Based on the note I have received, I created a 30-second sound piece. Then I created this storyboard according to the sound piece.  One strong element I would like to show in this narrative is a contrast between cold and warm. How this man is getting warmed from outside to inside is the key sensation I would like to deliver in my audio-visual piece.